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Single-commit orphan branch: full zed-industries/zed @ 8c74db0 source tree with a 3-file patch applied (no upstream history). Patch (crates/gpui_linux/src/linux/wayland/): - serial.rs: add SerialKind::KeyboardEnter - client.rs: store wl_keyboard.enter serial; add latest_serial_of() - window.rs: activate() uses keyboard-enter serial (Mutter focus gate) Mutter honors window activation only when the token carries the keyboard- focus serial from wl_keyboard.enter; GPUI used a stale mouse-press serial. See docs/tray-window-focus-wayland.md in logiguard. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Taboo Phrases
These patterns signal AI-generated or marketing-heavy copy. Eliminate all instances.
Hype Words
Never use these unless quoting someone else:
| Word/Phrase | Why It Fails |
|---|---|
| revolutionary | Unearned superlative |
| game-changing | Unearned superlative |
| cutting-edge | Vague tech buzzword |
| next-generation | Meaningless without context |
| blazingly fast | Cliché, unquantified |
| lightning-fast | Cliché, unquantified |
| powerful | Vague; what does it do? |
| robust | Vague; how is it robust? |
| seamless | Almost never true |
| frictionless | Almost never true |
| effortless | Dismisses real complexity |
| leverage | Corporate jargon |
| unlock | Marketing manipulation |
| supercharge | Marketing manipulation |
| turbocharge | Marketing manipulation |
| best-in-class | Unverifiable claim |
| world-class | Unverifiable claim |
| state-of-the-art | Vague tech buzzword |
| groundbreaking | Unearned superlative |
| innovative | Show, don't tell |
| intuitive | Often means "we didn't explain it" |
| elegant | Self-congratulatory |
AI Structural Patterns
These constructions reveal AI authorship:
Em Dash Chains
❌ "Zed is fast — really fast — and it shows in every interaction."
✅ "Zed is fast. You'll feel it in every interaction."
"It's not X, it's Y"
❌ "It's not just an editor — it's a complete development environment."
✅ "Zed combines editing, collaboration, and AI assistance in one workspace."
Triple Parallel Lists
❌ "Fast. Focused. Collaborative."
❌ "Write code. Ship faster. Stay in flow."
✅ "Zed is built for speed and collaboration."
Colon-Introduced Lists in Prose
❌ "Three things make Zed different: speed, collaboration, and AI."
✅ "Zed prioritizes speed, real-time collaboration, and AI integration."
Rhetorical Questions as Openers
❌ "What if your editor could keep up with your thinking?"
✅ "Zed renders every keystroke instantly."
Empty Enthusiasm
Remove all emotional manipulation:
| Pattern | Problem |
|---|---|
| "We're excited to announce..." | Nobody cares about your emotions |
| "We're thrilled to share..." | Same |
| "We can't wait for you to try..." | Presumptuous |
| "You'll love..." | Telling reader how to feel |
| "Get ready to..." | Marketing hype |
| "Say goodbye to..." | Cliché setup |
| "Say hello to..." | Cliché followup |
| "Finally, an editor that..." | Implies all others failed |
| "The wait is over" | Presumes anticipation |
| "Introducing..." (as standalone) | Weak opener |
Vague Benefits
Replace with specific outcomes:
| Vague | Ask Instead |
|---|---|
| "enhanced productivity" | How much faster? At what task? |
| "improved workflow" | What specific improvement? |
| "better experience" | Better how? Measurable? |
| "streamlined process" | What steps were removed? |
| "optimized performance" | What metric improved? |
| "increased efficiency" | What takes less time/effort? |
| "modern development" | What specific capability? |
| "next-level coding" | Meaningless |
| "superior quality" | By what measure? |
Forbidden Punctuation
| Pattern | Rule |
|---|---|
! |
Never. Zero exclamation points. |
... |
No dramatic ellipses |
| ALL CAPS | No shouting for emphasis |
? as hook |
No rhetorical questions as openers |
— overuse |
Max one em dash per paragraph |
Corporate Euphemisms
| Phrase | Problem |
|---|---|
| move the needle | Jargon |
| synergy | Meme-tier corporate |
| ecosystem | Often meaningless |
| paradigm shift | Dated buzzword |
| holistic approach | Vague |
| scalable solution | What scales? How? |
| actionable insights | Corporate speak |
| value proposition | Never in customer-facing copy |
| leverage (verb) | Use "use" instead |
| utilize | Use "use" instead |
| facilitate | Use clearer verb |
| empower | Patronizing |
| enable | Often vague; be specific |
Filler Phrases
Delete without replacement:
- "In today's fast-paced world..."
- "As developers, we know..."
- "Let's face it..."
- "The truth is..."
- "At the end of the day..."
- "When it comes to..."
- "In order to..."
- "It goes without saying..."
- "Needless to say..."
- "As you may know..."
Detection Checklist
Before finalizing, scan for:
- Superlatives: best, most, fastest, only, first, ultimate
- Absolutes: always, never, every, all, completely, totally
- Hedging: might, could, potentially, possibly, may help
- Intensifiers: very, really, extremely, incredibly, absolutely
- Vague quantifiers: many, numerous, significant, substantial
Rule: If you can't prove it or measure it, rewrite it.
Quick Reference
Instant red flags (auto-fail if present):
- Any exclamation point
- "We're excited/thrilled"
- "Revolutionary" or "game-changing"
- Em dash used 2+ times in one paragraph
- "It's not X, it's Y" construction
Yellow flags (review carefully):
- Any word from Hype Words list
- Sentences starting with "And" or "But"
- Questions in headlines
- Lists of exactly three items